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Nightmare 1 by ~bccomics:iconbccomics:



A Vampire's Tale...





I am normal until night,
I become vicious at twilight,
This ringing in my ears,
buries the screams she hears,

Bitter in soul,
I play my role,
Anxiety rising,
As I watch her dying,
While I quench my thirst...

Who am I,
to watch her die?
Who I am,
Killed her by hand...

Ying and Yang,
Sin and Fang,
Bloodlust is in my eyes,
Black as death vibes,
Confusion and suffering,
Turn to illusion and differing,
As I rid my thoughts...


Here is the assassin,
Standing in front of me,
Dagger in hand,
Smirking at me,

Playing with my hair,
between his fingers,
Licking the edges of his weapon...

My eyes stare at the tool,
As his voice breathed in cool,


"Why grieve,
when it was their time to leave?"


I shuddered as his hand,
traced my neckband...

Regret clutched what I had left,
Panic in me was louder than death,
My voice died,
My feelings pried,
The inside of me,
Begging to be freed,
From this place,
You call me.


He didn't see me,
As he fell to his knee,
With the weapon,
He used to threaten,
Dug deep,
In his most prized possession...


His heart.


She watched him fall,
She watched him crawl,
She watched him stall,
For the time,
He has left,
Will be deaf,
As he plunges into death...


Agony struck me again,
Claiming me, my friend,
As I sauntered away,
Awaiting another day...


"Help me," she said in strife.


"Save me...from this suffocating bubble...you call life."



(Dream #1)
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Author's Comments

Just like the title says...

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:iconaruman:
Wow, I don't think I've seen something you've written so dark before, not that it's wrong I'm just saying that I've never seen it from you. The only dark story that has really appealed to me was Deathnote so I'm not too interested but I think this poem is very well written. Ever thought of publishing?

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A being in the center of the Universe that shares my soul can change into any organism, what can yours do?
I believe in Jesus Christ my Savior. If you do too and aren't scared to admit it then copy and paste this in your signature
:iconbccomics:
It's not something I would usually write. I apologize...that dream has been bugging me. Woke me up at 2:00. And what do you mean by publishing...?

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My name is of no importance. Just know that I am the one who will always drink out of the victor's cup. The one who rides the wind currents in the vast midnight skies of Italy. I am the white eagle... Altair.
:iconaruman:
No don't apologize, it's your art you should be proud of what your mind produces, and according to my Inter-Dimensional Destiny Comics it can even create other worlds. Also publishing is when you submit a piece of literature of your creation to a company that distributes them. I was thinking this could turn into something good.

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A being in the center of the Universe that shares my soul can change into any organism, what can yours do?
I believe in Jesus Christ my Savior. If you do too and aren't scared to admit it then copy and paste this in your signature
:iconbccomics:
Wha-?! Seriously?! I thought this was horrible. I really didn't want to write it, but there was a writing contest, and I had to enter. You know how it is when you want to be on top.. (competitive side kicked in) I thought I could be them, but...it involved joining a club and I decided not to. So, I just wrote what I was going to submit. Based on a dream..

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My name is of no importance. Just know that I am the one who will always drink out of the victor's cup. The one who rides the wind currents in the vast midnight skies of Italy. I am the white eagle... Altair.
:iconaruman:
Dreams, a vision from our very subconscience that comes to us when we enter a state of resting the systems in our body. Anything that comes from that makes an interesting story.

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A being in the center of the Universe that shares my soul can change into any organism, what can yours do?
I believe in Jesus Christ my Savior. If you do too and aren't scared to admit it then copy and paste this in your signature
:iconbccomics:
Hmm... I never thought of it that way. As a matter of fact my OC and manga came from dreams of recent. =3

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My name is of no importance. Just know that I am the one who will always drink out of the victor's cup. The one who rides the wind currents in the vast midnight skies of Italy. I am the white eagle... Altair.
:iconaruman:
Nice.

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A being in the center of the Universe that shares my soul can change into any organism, what can yours do?
I believe in Jesus Christ my Savior. If you do too and aren't scared to admit it then copy and paste this in your signature
:iconchange-love-live:
Wow... That was very well written. It's interesting and very dark, but intriguing, considering the way it is written. I love it, to be totally honest. It's very, very good.

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My dear young lady, there was a great deal of truth, I dare say, in what you said, and you looked very pretty while you said it, which is much more important :: Oscar Wilde
:iconbccomics:
Hehe. Thank you very much! If you want, I can do another one.

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My name is of no importance. Just know that I am the one who will always drink out of the victor's cup. The one who rides the wind currents in the vast midnight skies of Italy. I am the white eagle... Altair.

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